This...this is wonderfully written. Truly. Slappy sounds both evil and good in here, caring for Carrie (so far) and being cruel to the other people mean to her. I'm really looking forward to the next update.

Even through just the narration, I can feel the emotions flowing out from the words, unspoken. I love this. Thank you for writing this great piece. :)

-ML.

This story is really good so far! Keep it up, I can't wait to read the next chapter! :D