Personally i don't believe the Narcoleptic Argentinian would care that much. Interesting fic never the less.

WHERE IS THE SISTER FIC? JESUS CHRIST THIS IS AMAZING!

Oh. *shivers* Goodness gracious, Storm, that was amazing. So intense and chilling and . . . scary.

Wonderful.

ooh, Storm. Quite the dark and chilling fic. I figured out who it was a bit early on, but then again, I always have been a quick one... on to the sister fic!

Wow. Creepy. I admit I had a little problem trying to figure out whose pov it was, but that could have more to do with it being 6 a.m. than anything else. This was great., the characters were handled very well.

i just read ur other fic, the sequel i forgot what its called, n now i read this, though it probly should've been the other way around.

anyway... i really really like both of them, together they make a very chilling story. i especially like the last line of this one.

Whoa... poor lil' Argentinean! Yikes... that was intense... Very good though. Very good. I could see it playing before my mind like some twisted story of revenge, and a desire to do good that was marred by the need to commit evil in order to fulfill it. Bravo!