Hmm. It's an interesting idea. I assume the woman in black is supposed to be Death, or the Dark Mother. Rogue bargained her love for his life.

You do make a few errors, but as English is not your first language all are certainly forgivable. It also looks as though this story was written almost seven years ago, unless my interpretation of the date is wrong. Overall a decent one-shot.

Wow, you should really think about making a sequel or series with this, it has a really good and interesting plot line...great job!

Omg! Ah'm crying ah cant even see the keyboard. Omg as if. Love the story!

Bye Sugar

i love that song! great portrayal of it. i bet the loving chick in the video felt just like you had rogue feel when the dark woman came... gooooood

I Have to Say That was Just Tooo Lovey-Dovey-Gushy-Mushy-Story.

That was really good. You write really well, even if English isn't your first language. I really hope that you may continue this fic. Keep up the good work! :)

Wow, that was really wierd! And really cool! keep on writing!

that was so sweet, you should continue that story, and have Logan develop his feelings for her, then prove the difficult task of loving someone, and not being able to say it!

That was really good, keep it up!

wow that was good i hope you continue umm there most be a lope hole in that deal.

wait a sec. so did that mean she did say she loved him and he died? or what? now i am confused...good story though...*BAMF*