awwww,

I wish the riding scene had been a bit more detailed but it was very sexy. We need more FDom! Lol. The Victorious section on Adult Fan Fiction is seriously lacking, you should consider posting this there as well since it is so good.

I really liked it! Tbh usually I dig the power roles being the other way around, but it was realistic (considering this is a kid's show, anyway xD) and it didn't come off sounding porno-ish like a bunch of these sort of fics do. I like the subtleness that you used to to address Jade's cutting, too. "Jade knows they have some serious talking to do soon..." was also probably my fave line; grounds it in reality, ya know? lol I don't even know what I'm saying any more, but yeah, I really enjoyed this!

Uhh... wow! That is seriously all I can say. Loved it!

I love how after I do a bondage bdsm other people do it too. Then they top it more for violence.