This has been a wonderfully written fanfic. An eleven out of ten stars if I were to rate it! You have a very solid problem (ki blindness) and a satisfactory ending. I also like the subtle camaraderie between goku and vegeta. Well it was an enjoyable read. Clearly deserving a good review!

Wow this story sounds interesting. A good twist to have them not able to use Ki...

I've always had a bit of a liking for #17! But after reading this it's like a surge of affection for him exploded in me! *.*

So if anyone knows a good Juunanagou fic please do lead me to it $

And this fic has been lying in my favorites for so long now without reading.. since I usually don't read any non-Vegeta centered fic.. but I've come to regret it now!

This was wayyyyy too AWESOME for words jinja ! *.*

I've always had a bit of a liking for #17! But after reading this it's like a surge of affection for him exploded in me! *.*

So if anyone knows a good Juunanagou fic please do lead me to it $

And this fic has been lying in my favorites for so long now without reading.. since I usually don't read any non-Vegeta centered fic.. but I've come to regret it now!

This was wayyyyy too AWESOME for words jinja ! *.*

I know it's been almost ten years since you wrote this story, but I think that's a testament to both the quality of this story and the sheer talent you possess. This truly was a great fic, even though I know you've moved on to other series, and you probably won't see this review. LOL

I thought it was so ironic that for all the crying Chi-Chi did about not wanting to be alone, in the end, it was Goku who ended up alone (at least, for a little while, anyway). I love the way you characterized him here; he's my favorite character in the whole series, and I've found too few fics that have really been able to do him justice. So, on that alone, I have to give you major props! But, you went above and beyond that too. You gave attention to other characters and made sure that they got their own time in the limelight as well. The fact that you were able to juggle so many characters and still make the story exciting to read is no small feat. You are really good!

All in all, this was probably one of the best DBZ fics I've ever read, and I'm not exaggerating when I say that every DBZ fan should get to read this story one day. :)

I really, really enjoyed this. The plot was super good! Every time I thought I knew where it was going, you totally twisted it a different direction and your characterizations were so good! Plus, you did a great job of handling such a large group of characters is simultaneous scenes without it becoming confusing or boring.

the god of the god of the god of the god of the god of earth is defeated by a ki field? O.o makes for good comedy though :)

found this just now. gotta stop here and compliment you on this chapter. that bit where vegeta was so conflicted about leaving goku and survive or staying behind to try and keep him alive...i almost cried. it was so powerful. and the part later on where vegeta mentally berated goku for complimenting him since he was going to leave had the same effect on me. this is so dark but so powerful at the same time. beautifully done!

I really enjoyed this. Thank you for bringing the non-Saiyans back to the battle; it was really good to see them there again.

should have cut the beans in half like they'd done in the past.

I'm not planning on giving a long review...maybe. Hopefully not. Lol.

I discovered this masterpiece in someone else's favorites, but let me just say, I am SERIOUSLY inspired to write a story of my own. I swear, this made me laugh, made me mad, made me cry (almost)...just, it was like watching a really, REALLY good movie that I just can't replace! Kinda like Toy Story. Whatever.

Everything was just so perfect! If it wasn't the detail (I swear you have the most detailed story I've ever read in my entire life), then it was the fact that everyone was in-character. You've included pretty much everyone from Dragon Ball to Dragon Ball Z. I was laughing when everyone was wondering where Mr. Satan was. Probably on vacation, who knows. Knowing him, he's probably boasting about how he saved the world or something, or hiding behind Buu. Who knows? He probably played a major part in the entire thing.

My most favorite thing about this entire story, has got to be the relationship between Goku and Vegeta. It's rare that I find stories that have those two portrayed as complete comrades. And I can honestly say that regardless of the fact that those two are rivals, they can be considered as best friends. Especially with the way you've described their relationship. You've done an absolute awesome job portraying the characters! A-freaking-MAZING! I absolutely adore the fact that you've included the minor characters. People tend to forget that people like Tien, Yamcha, Krillin (sometimes anyway), #17, Launch or Lunch, etc. I'm guilty, even though technically, I haven't started on it yet.

One of my favorite scenes was when Goku saw 001 snap Goten's neck. I almost cried, seriously. I had a lump in my throat and I was thoroughly anticipating Goku's reaction. I knew it wasn't good, not after he felt Chi-Chi and Gohan die too. After he had powered down due to Vegeta (I awed as this part) called him 'Goku' to try and calm him down, I thought Goku was going to cry. Had the be one of the most painful, if not one of the best scenes in this entire story. Goten is my favorite kid character in Dragon Ball Z, so to read about his neck being broken, kinda hit me hard. Glad Goku punished 001 the way he did. That bastard...

Anyways, no more rambling. I look forward to seeing more awesome stories like this one, because seriously, this was the BEST story I've ever read in my life! Akira seriously needs to be introduced to this and make a movie out of it. It was just that freaking awesome! GOODNESS! The level of detail was superb! Especially when you described the inner workings of the Dragon Balls when Goku was wishing everything back to normal. That was another of my favorite scenes.

Done! I hope to see more stories from you soon on Dragon Ball Z, and I'll make sure to keep an eye out. I wish they I had your level of detail, because man, oh man, it's the bomb diggity. Good luck on your other stories! You have inspired me to write something of my own!

I LOVED this story. I'm still not sure what Buu was doing—surely his magic would have helped this whole situation—but the sheer scale of what happened was incredible. Even though I knew (that is, assumed) that the Senshi would win, knew with absolute certainty when I began the story, I felt fear for them. Even though I knew the Dragonballs would solve everything, I felt the horror of the attack. This story pushed everything closer to the edge than I ever would have thought possible. The spiders are a spectacular enemy. Excellent work.

Hi, I just started reading your fic, an really enjoy it. I'm planning to work through a lot more, but I just wanted to leave a quick note: instantaneous movement, the mechanism by which the Kaioshin teleport, is very different from Instant Transmission, the mechanism Goku uses. The latter is dependent on locating a target ki, and affected by the difficulty of sensing ki aross large distances. The former, however, consists of teleportation directly to a physical, geographic location; this mechanism is also not related to ki. Thus, the Kaioshin should not be affected.

I just wanted to point that out. I'm okay going through the rest of the story pretending the Kaioshin use the same mechanism as Goku; it definitely looks like a story worth reading!

This was just absolutely amazing. You're writing style and portrayal of the characters was mind boggling to read and I just kept coming back for more! You did an awesome job!

Don't know how I stumbled upon this, but WOW. That was freaking amazing. Wonderful job. I loved every bit of it, but I especially loved this epilogue. 1000. Thank you so much for writing this! :)