 Beaslays 10/18/11 . chapter 1Ohh, brilliant :) Gave me a few things to think about. |
 Sweet Angel 10/14/11 . chapter 1 Excellent writing. I hope you do more stories like this. :) |
 VIP 10/14/11 . chapter 1 Powerful, astute and well written. |
 MeTube 10/14/11 . chapter 1 That was cleverly done. Very evocative, and well done. |
 Genie 10/14/11 . chapter 1 This is really something - very ominous and makes a lot of good points.
Great job. |