Oh please, oh please, im begging you to continue this story it is so good!

I know you haven't updated in like 2 years but there is more to the story. They escape from the orphanage and go to Mr. Warbuck's house.

Nice! Favorite quote on this page: "I pretend I ain't scared."
You are good at portraying tough girls who aren't always as tough as they seem, like Eponine. You do a nice job. Keep writing, if it's what you really love to do. : )

Very creative! I like it. I like that you put it in the first person, and the language, especially in the beginning, really sounds like Pepper. Keep writing. You'll just keep getting better and better, even if you have "off days". You have a gift. : ) Well done, you are putting your gift to good use. : ) Best wishes for your future endeavors. : )

Really brilliant second POV to the 1982 film. Please write more, can't wait for the chapter where Pepper finally gets adopted, whether by Warbucks or by someone else (it's not in the movie, but in an Off-broadway sequel to Annie, after Grace and Warbucks marry, they decide to adopt all the orphans). Gotta love this story!

Continue this! This is awesome, you're doing grwat!

Out of all of the Annie stories I've ever read yours is my favorite! Please continue it is amazing! :) 3

AMAZING! You should finish the story, its fantastic! :)

seriously continue it pleas!

I've always loved pepper, you should continue this story to the end of the movie and onward...really its good.

So glad you are continuing, and I love that you are branching out with scenes that weren't in the movie at all. Hope we get a little more of Pepper's backstory.

I really like this story! Pepper is such an interesting character, I can't wait to see what you do with this.

I am really enjoying this story and can't wait for the next chapter!

I am really enjoying this story and can't wait for the next chapter!

This is quite good, I hope you'll continue it.