Hmmmn... Interesting plot, too bad it wasn't that long, I'm hoping that your next chapter would be long enough to take your readers imagination take off . I would really wait for your next update,so pls. Update it soon :)

NICE work. :D I love Sebastian/Grell, and your OC seems very cool. I want to know what happens next. Can you please review my Kingdom Hearts story? :3 Don't worry I'm going to finish it then start another story, which will be part 2. I'm also working on another fanfic. XD.

Interesting

Good amount of detail

Short and sweet

Please do more

Thank u! :D