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| KoRnChildG 2007-07-16 ch 5,  | abuseNice story! I think you could've done more with her relationship with Will, but i liked it nonetheless. thanks for sharing. |
| kell26 2003-02-28 ch 5, | abuseThis was good. Poor Caitlin she loves Will but she doesnt want to get in more troble |
| Kelly aka KellaBella 2002-08-08 ch 5, anon. | abuseThanks for all the "wonderful" reviews. Yes, I know this story is really bad, but I lost all interest in Caitlin's Way about one chapter into it. I was going to turn it into something else but I didn't. I don't mean to sound sobby, but if you want to leave a lame review "anything that doesn't have a point or contains the word sux." PLEASE DON'T WASTE YOUR TIME! I have no problem with the word sucks because it's a real english word. Sorry I know typing two extra letters is hard for some people. |
| MeanAsMalfoy 2002-08-06 ch 5, anon. | abuseI've never ever said htis to ne1 before. But you really deserve it.... THIS STORY SUX!!!! |
| Holden Hit Hollywood 2002-06-09 ch 5, | abuseI'm sorry, but that ending was REALLY lame. The rest of the story was pretty good, beside the fact that you need a beta reader, and I enjoyed it. You could've waited until you had another idea, and wrote that instead. Just don't let people pressure you into writing more. Do it for you. |
| Sw3EtesTSiNneR 2002-05-30 ch 5, | abuseNice twist . Would you consider a sequel? |
| Coleridge82 2002-05-11 ch 4, | abuseI think Caitlin and Jim should contiune to have problems with each other; from time to time. I mean that's how they bond is when they don't see eye to eye. They discover what the other is about when they watch how they act in the situation. Sides to Caitlin; Jim Lowe is the closets thing she has to an father. |
| PH34R M3 2002-05-09 ch 3, | abuseNO!!! Caitlin and JIM forever!!!!! |
| PH34R M3 2002-05-02 ch 2, | abuseTry to stick with present-tense or past-tense, one or the other. Other than that, and the fact that I don't think Caitlin would go "partying" it's a good story. |
| Kamolli 2002-05-01 ch 2, anon. | abuseI think that you should add some extra action. It sounds good.I think you should make another chapter. |
| Cool ... 2002-04-28 ch 2, anon. | abuseAs I was reading where Jim was looking at the magaines waiting for Caitlin; I was expecting her to say that she was pregant. The hung over part is pretty good too. Keep the story up. |
| Cool 2002-04-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseI love it. Keep it comming. |
| sammunro 2002-04-28 ch 2, | abusePlease , please please please PLEASE put up the next chapters soon |