Great story and pairing!

If you are reading this story and enjoyed it, I reccomend that you read the sequel. Like this one, it is well written, a testament to the authors dedication to the craft of writing.

A little stiff here and there in the dialouge with some points that could use improvements. It was a little iffy to read here and there (Need time breaks, more dialouge, etc) and Chapters would help. The ending was a little...meh...
Otherwise this has been one of the best fics I've read on . Good concept, good idea, good story. Keep writing and improving!

I can really see this happening in the series. It is an great story, one of the best I've ever read and that's saying something.

This IS just to spite you, you know. Anyway. Other than the "YES AKITO AND RYOKO"-ness that many people seem to agree with, I really really enjoyed the thread theory on Boson Jumping. I usually just go into it as time, like they did in the series, but this is also WAY plausible. Go you. *waves fan*

This is a viable A/U to the main Nadeisco story line. Kudos on the plot and the way you engineered the relationship between Ryoko and Akito. Now the fun really begins as he now has a hard choice to consider. Too bad they don't aalow more than one wife in this universe!

dennisud

Holy Moly! That was the longest fanfiction that I've read straight through. Which should prove a point. I wouldn't have had read it all at the same time if it weren't good. Anyway, I LOVED this fanfic! It may have taken an hour to read, but it was extremely well-done and accurate. I like the exploration of Ryoko/Akito and I don't even know how you came up with the strand theory (Unless you stole it of course). It matches the anime incredibly well, which is rare in some cases.

-Some Person

Man, I love your stuff! Keep writing at this level of excellence, and you're always going to have at least one fan - Myself!

Excellent story. Good work with ccurate characterization and a plot that isn't even very far off of Nadesico's plausability scale. I look forward to more work by this author.

very well done! poor ryoko doesn't get the treatment she deserves

You did a very good job with this one, please continue. Ja-ne (_)

There are very few Akito/Ryoko fanfics out there and even fewer that are incredibly well written and believable as well! I would honestly put this one on my favorites list and wait six months for the sequel! (PLEASE WRITE ANOTHER!) Just the same, I am duly impressed with the whole thing. Everyone seems to be in character and it was just felt *right* to watch Akito and Ryoko go through the whole thing together the way they did. It's truly a masterpiece, I applaud your brilliance and ingenuity! Although it was short, it was well worth reading and once more, I hope yo write another one like this one! Keep it up!

Very, very well written. This story is plausible and for the most part in keeping with the spirit of the series. It explores possibilities not developed in the show itself, while at the same time keeping action and dialogue in-character. I have an enormous amount of respect for anyone who can sit down and write a complete fanfiction, rather than spreading it out in episodes. The ending is the only thing that is a little odd. It would fit if the story had been intended to be more of a comedy, but it seems abrupt as it is. Very good on the whole, though.