|Reviews for First Date Failures|
| RubyRed.950 4/30/12 . chapter 1
Brilliant, really good, honestly.
| MissingMommy 2/24/12 . chapter 1
This was definitely hilarious. I'm glad it worked out for the best in the end. (Well, of course it had to, with Harry being born and all).
Anyways, I didn't see any grammar mistakes, but it really is harder to notice in a longer piece. Your characters were spot on as well. Though, I am curious as to why James wanted to apologize in private.
| serindraxx 10/20/11 . chapter 1
I have to say, I'm a very picky reader nowadays. If you can keep my attention that well, the story must be good.
| Hippogriffs Fly Free 10/13/11 . chapter 1
Awesome story! Very entertaining. You could make thins into a two chapter story and say how the first date actually goes. Anyway, good job!
| dancingonstars 10/13/11 . chapter 1
That was really good. It was sweet and cute and I totally lol'd at the end when Sirius turned back into a human on lily's lap. Great story.
| dkjf 10/13/11 . chapter 1
Haha, I liked it. Its not the first story I've read with the forgot to plan a first date them, but this one was really well-handled. Great job.
| sti 10/13/11 . chapter 1
Yeah, boys are totally clueless sometimes (well, almost everytime) ) I liked it, I am glad that she didnt let him to get away so easily. Will you continue? I would like to see what has he planned.