Dispite you saying it's crappy I think your Original "A Stitch in Time" is outstanding and very creative

However

I'm sorry but this story is crappy I can understand Nodoka being PO'd at the Tendos I can understand her wanting the seppuku contract fulfilled as most versions of Nodoka do what I can't understand is this version not honoring her own seppuku contract by instead just slicing off Ranma's head and leave Genma alive

Nice.

I've read quite a few fictions where Nodoka was... shall we say... "Less than pleased" about Ranma's curse, and of those only a very few even broach the subject of Ranma adhearing to the suppuku pakt. I guess it's a subject most writers are fearful to touch. But this one, even though is short, concise and to the point (pardon the unintentional pun), it is highly... interesting. I'll even go so far as to say it might be the best of this morbid little facet of Ranma fanfiction.

Though, I'm uncertain to WHAT that might be saying about the fic in realtion to its few counterparts. Hmm?

A

Dark, but it works well.

um this weird but i like it . i just keep thinking of everbody getting reveng or somethin 00 this is creepy but very good.

*now if only i could find my dull rusted trusty ax and ... nevermind i wont say that ill get nodoka with it _...oops! ehehehe dont dont listen to me um i think ill go now. bai bai

i want revenge !

from Ryoko the space pirate _0

This is sick!

i hope you die a painful bloody death for making me read this shit, geez, i HATE readint this snuff crap! maybe if ranma was the one to come home carrying nodokas head then maybe...

imortis

...poor bastard.

Hey, we've all seen this coming, and somewhere, someWAY, ol' Nodoka would have been able to catch the shattered Ranma off guard and take his head off with that damn sword of hers no problem!

All I can say is cool.

Yikes.