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| dogbertcarroll 2004-02-09 ch 1,  | abuseI was hoping for a Nabiki Ranma pairing. The bit with Akane just seems wrong and there seems to be a lot left out. |
| Alabee 2002-05-30 ch 1, | abusegood story |
| EternallyLost 2002-05-14 ch 1, | abuseIt seems to me like you just took a typical scenario (Hey! Ranma finally wises up!) and then made your own thing out of it. Considering that, it seems to have come out really well, although there's still quite a few loose ends to tie up (namely Mousse, Ryoga, and getting rid of the other girls now that he's with Akane.) |
| Sporanox 2002-04-29 ch 1, | abuseYou better update this piece of work soon!! |
| D-Chan3 2002-04-29 ch 1, | abuseI liked the story alot and I was waiting for yo to finish it. I think you should continue to write it. Oh and by the way. On your Bangal tale 2, You should have Ranma regain his memories and heal completely. Maybe have them figure out a way for him to be male again. I really don't like the idea of his mother killing him or it even being implied. You've always been a good writer and I've always been partial to happy endings. Also on your Kitten or Cat story...I hope you'll continue to write it. I keep looking on your page to see if it's been updated. I hope Akane finds Ranma in time. I hope you continue. |
| wannall 2002-04-28 ch 1, | abuseThis story has a lot of potential, but I feel it needs a prologue to explain why Ranma decided to do this now and perhaps detail some of his thought processes. It also has a lot of potential for a long-term continuation or divergence story. |
| dunefar 2002-04-28 ch 1, | abuseNot bad, but Ranma is OOC at this point. There's no explination for him changing, he just does. With some work on the events leading up to it, this problem would be solved. |
| saibie 2002-04-27 ch 1, | abuseHmmmm...I don't like this thing with Nabiki. |