Lmao! Way to ruin the moment Toph! Hehehe... I would've felt like real awkward after that. This was great XD

Good job :)

ok so:

"uncharacteristic of hers" should be "uncharacteristic of her".

Skeptical**

Use less brackets in stories, it's not like poetry :p

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that was the harshest i could be with you, since i decided i prefer reading harsh critiques on my stories so figured you should as well ;)

now now, when did i doubt the Queen-of-subtle's subtle abilities? :p but having someone poking you around isn't exactly subtle, hun, show me more. MORE.

"His touch was feathery, like silk, like the last child in a war-torn world." (Y) favorite quote.

as expected from you, genius. i needn't say any more 'insert 's nail-swinging her hair'

Nice read! keep writing!

I seriously don't know why people would read this and then complain and then not even leave their 'name' .. *shaking head* Honestly!

Aside from that .. I thought this was just awesome. So sweet and fluffy but with a dash of reality at the end there cause, I mean personal space is just something that can't be trampled on that easily .. you need to work up to that -_ lol

I loved this.

i cant understand what leads someone to liking this creepy pairing...