I love the ending. I really hope that I don't have an attitude like that when I'm pregnant. I wish I was pregnant now, since I've read this. Actually I've wanted to have a child a lot sooner than this, which it's driving me crazy cause I'm not even there yet but this just makes me want to even more.

I so love them together. Anyways, I know you have a lot of grammar mistakes, which it kind of makes it a bit harder to read. Even though in my head I say to myself what word should be there. But the smartest thing for you or any author, is to get a beta. Preferably one who will actually work on the grammar mistakes. I'm really not trying to be, it's just my opinion and a lot of readers would agree. Believe me, a beta would be a lot of help. But your stories are still awesome. I love reading them, I really do.

At 5 months, a woman's stomach isn't that huge, usually not until the 6th or 7th month. And I'm not complaining cause I love your stories, how in the world was Kreacher, who's a small old house elf able to help him up?

I like the story :D

ah this was a nice story ]

I wanted to like this story, the plot line seems good. However, I had to stop reading it as the grammar and spelling are atrocious. You have left words out, you have used wrong words. Do you have a Bata for this story? If not I suggest you get one ASAP and go over the whole story for mistakes. If you do I suggest you get a new one, because the one you have isn't doing their job. Sorry.

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww... :')

pooor harry...

Poor draco... love it so far.

yeay to Mpreg! XD

Perfect ending! And I love the little con they played in lucius. Only thing was the grammar mistakes, ( sorry I'm weird like that with spelling and stuff ) but overall an excellent story, I've said it before but I love your writing :)

Aww fantastic end to a fantastic story :)

that was a cute ending, lol seems like lucius got attached. lol

Awwwww!

Brilliant ending :)

I like it.

This was lovely.

I didn't get the whole thing about Lucius. Draco should've know what he's father was like already. And how could Lucius like Harry, the man didn't even know it was him. Of course finances would be important to a such a man. But Draco was very slytherin about the way he went to not get disinherited.

I wonder, would things change if Lucius did get another wife and heir? That is unless Harry and Draco give the malfoy heir title to one of their children? I mean Lucius is still young and he did marry Narcissa to get an heir, it would be easy to do it again. If all the money still went to Draco, the new Malfoy child would surely be bitter and I doubt Draco would want that for his brother..