|Reviews for The Spy From Candor|
| Guest 3/9/13 . chapter 15
Great chapter! I love reading this story - please update soon :)
| Guest 7/6/12 . chapter 9
its able tris and four
| JoJo 4/30/12 . chapter 1
heyyyyyyyyyyyyyy I'm reviewing your story because its amazing and awesome
| icyfirelove3 3/2/12 . chapter 8
OMG YES FINALLY TEEGAN AND AVA!
Sorry, i just got really happy hehe XD
Awesomely done and the poems were really cute!
And stupid eric, I hate that guy -_-
I like the way you made him their childhood tormentor, it fit in nicely with the story.
Awesome job again!
| icyfirelove3 2/19/12 . chapter 7
Haha, I love Ava. And I seriously love the way you write; it has enough detail to make it interesting but not an overkill to make it boring.
And UGH, you're KILLING me, just let them be together! Seriously evil. They are so CUTE together.
Aha, anyways, great job! I really loved this(:
| Fanficnaomi 2/8/12 . chapter 6
This is great - love the story! Please update soon :)
| Risuko 1/2/12 . chapter 1
I like this story so far. It seems interesting, having two kids from Candor who lied. I think it might be a bit harsh to say that if you lie even once, even as a kid, you become factionless, but the factions aren't exactly moderate.
I thought it was very interesting how Ava and Teegan became friends. They are both really fun characters. I kind of wish that we could see them try to get through initiation into whichever faction they choose. Ava is smart, but she doesn't really seem like she would be an Erudite. I love this story and I hope you continue.
| icyfirelove3 11/28/11 . chapter 4
Great job. I will like the way you write but I don't get the hole green thing. What's wrong with the color green?
Good job, again :)
Update soon (and try to answer my question please cause i'm very lost with the green part)
| icyfirelove3 11/27/11 . chapter 3
Haha, I love the way you write. It's like...really detailed and interesting.
I like the whole puzzle idea - i wonder where it will go. Cool idea with it though! Must have been hard to think of it.
Oh snap...the guys in the woods were talking about Erudite, right?
Dang...this is gonna get intense!
Anyways, awesome job! Can't wait to see what happens!