I like the story very much so far, however some of the original characters personalities and characteristics are not portrayed to their fullness in your writing, Karigan, Zachery, Stevic. But I do like the story line and will still read, good luck.

I thought that she was a stornger swordsmen then that, i also balive that candor would be able to out run the normal horses with out any trubble. That man just needs to be beaten himself.

A very sweet story. I hope you will consider writting more for this story. Have a Merry Christmas!

Altough maybe I'm not experienced reader, I really like your style of writing. Writing to you that review is the best way to show you, how glad I am when reading your stories, both Kanmorhan Vane and Life on the run, because writing anything in English isn't in my the most expanded skills. Please, keep writing. Propably you don't know that, but waiting for updates is very stressful experience!

First to review . . . oh yeah. I likes it! My secret desires for the couple played out! I admit I emitted quite a few girlish giggles reading this first chapter. Can't wait for more!