great story

great story keep it up

ROSE!

I cant wait to read time crash.

I dont have anything against alex's the actress but I do not like how they played out river. Cant wait to see how you fix it.

looking forward to continuation of this series...glad you are re-writing certain characters from series 4!

Great work on this chapter and story. I am glade you are plaining to keep this story going in sequels.

One thing I hope you will touch on more as cannon droped the ball on it in my oppion is when Jenny (Doc clone/kid) as I liked her but they cut her out after that one show. One thing you could even pleay with is make that River before she changes in looks and regens.

I do wounder why you said you did not like something you found out about her was? Is it that she "killed" the doctor as if it is you must see the fanaly of the lates season to find out about how that goes about.

Nicely done. I can't wait for the sequels.

Another nice chapter. Keep up the good work.

Small but good changes from cannon.

Sweet

Another nice chapter. Keep up the good work.

Almost taken right out of cannon but I do like the little thing with Jack in this chapter.

I love this story. Rose and the 10th Doctor are awesome together. This is very clever, sticking her into this episode. Of course she should be a Time Lady. River was Time Lord just for being conceived on the Tardis while in transit, so how much more should Rose have been affected by looking into the Time Vortex. Anyway, I'm favoriting this!

Another nice chapter. Keep up the good work.

Both choices so suck. I would have to pick the second though as it would still bid time. If time lords carry as human that is 9 mounths if they even have a child the first time togther. It could take more then one time and even then it still gives them 9 months or so to try something before he could even take the kid away.