this was a very unique and well written fanfic. cant wait for more.

I found this extremely intriguing. Normally, I stay away from post-Revolutions fics, but this one is very good and well written. I hope to see an update soon!

wow, why did it take me so long to read this? this is fantastic. i'm intrigued that you wrote it a kind of screenplay fashion. maybe its the length that trips people out, but i understand why its such a long chapter. i'd advise seperating dialouge to make it less cluttered, but i'm not your beta reader or anything. i'd definitly love to read more, you left me hanging :( no, thats a good thing, i love cliffhangers.