|Reviews for Who Loves Who More|
| Miwasaki Yuki 1/25/13 . chapter 1
Ooh, wow. Their kid's pretty smart. :D definitely like the parents. :)
| Yue Asuka 12/4/12 . chapter 1
after read the escape one i really could imagine how this story born but in au and i like it so much!
thank you for the great story XD
| YGP 3/7/12 . chapter 1
This was a very sweet story. I like how you described the relationship between Aqua and Vanitas through the eyes of their son.
| cc 12/27/11 . chapter 1
seriously SO sweet
i love this pairing so muchhh heheheh
thanks for writing!
| FlowersN'stars 12/14/11 . chapter 1
This was really well written. I love how the son describes his parents love for each other and even when they have their fights, they love each other more than any other couple could. This was really good and you had a great plot,well done! :)
| QueenOfCrazy 11/22/11 . chapter 1
That might have been one of the most beautiful VanitasXAqua stories I have ever read. It was lovely, well written. The phrases were all worded so perfectly. I can even see them having this little boy and screaming their lungs out at each other at the same time.
| TeeHunter13 10/21/11 . chapter 1
| eolhcsullivan452 10/18/11 . chapter 1
What a magnificent little story you have here, Celine!
And isn't that song inspiring? It led me to writing an entire multi-chaptered SoKai story, after all. And I still think it's one of my best stories.
The song is powerful, and should be treated as such. And you've done very, very well here.
First off, I love that this stays with the canon you've created with them. I can look back at "Escape", for example, and imagine, "Okay. This is the son they could have had if Vanitas and Aqua could have been together.
And even though you say this is AU, I can imagine it isn't. In fact, I think this could work quite well as an alternate future game fic.
As always, I love the way you write Vanitas and Aqua. And I think you've discovered something very deep and true to them here. There's a thin line between "fairytale love" and "hate love" (for lack of a better term). And since most fairytale love is quite obsessive and intense, I can see how both sides could blend into the other.
Caleum is right. His parents do love each other, but it's more that they're opposites and clash. But I think it's the differences that they like about each other. They bring out different sides to each other and make them consider different things.
Very well done. I hope you explore more with their family. I'm particularily interested in what Caleum will end up to be. Probably the perfect bridge between them. Hahaha.
And I love the way Vanitas is in this! I'm on his side about the Unversed plushie. If this were canon, we'd definitely know why Aqua objected to that. LOL.
The fic description quote (the love versus lust one) is really funny, too. And Caelum's reaction when he finally realized what they were doing, but valued that it meant they loved each other. LOL.
By the way, love the pic on dA! I can so see him as their son.
Perfect work, Celine! Hope you're doing well and that we can talk soon.
NaNoWriMo's next month. I'm going to cross my fingers that you'll consider doing it alongside me this year;)
If you have time, and it's something you'd want to do, of course.
| kingdomhearts4evar 10/18/11 . chapter 1
| Lilac Phoenix 10/16/11 . chapter 1
LE GASP! D: You gave them a baby!
Just kidding XD but this is a surprise.
Tenchufreak on DA used that song for a VanQua music video she made XD
Although I don't know how to pronounce Caelum, it seems like a pretty name for their little one.
This one-shot was well written and VERY, VERY sweet. I love the way you handled this. Your OC is adorable and just this story overall is so well handled.
I'm gonna refer Ann to this piece since I KNOW she'll enjoy this XD
Excellent work Celine!
| Kiryn 10/16/11 . chapter 1
Um...I've always thought that the two could be parents, even good ones. As evidenced by AEM. And damn it, but now you make me want to run off and write some more of that story when I should be working on my homework. My life is so unfair.
But anyway, awwwwwwwww. I love this story so much. Like, really. So very, very much. You've captured them all perfectly in here, and just...if I could hug this story, then I would. I suppose I'll just have to settle for hugging my laptop instead. *hugs*
Seriously, amazing, spectacular job. I could list every positive adjective in the dictionary, and I still wouldn't have enough praise for this story. :)
| Mirae-no-sekai 10/16/11 . chapter 1
Whoa... nice piece. And that's pretty much how they'd work out, if it ever happened...
| WishingDreamer5 10/16/11 . chapter 1
D'aww, that's actually pretty sweet. I love how you gave a meaning of 'love' that fits both Aqua and Vanitas, because that makes it extra special and believable, and that you chose for Caelum as their child's name is fitting, too. (it reminds me of Ven a little, so I can see why Aqua would name her child like that).