|Reviews for For Whom the Bells Toll|
| writtenbymonkey 1/7/12 . chapter 2
I enjoyed reading your fic. I would have liked to see a little more character interaction. Maybe a conversation between kewne and Selphi. Its well described and features good character development. Its nice to see Gosh not being a git.
One note on the use of Japanese, It was not used in the English version game and it can be confusing to the average reader.
Looking forward to more.