Wow. I haven't seen a good tp fic in years. I'd forgotten all about this show! Very good plot, great pacing, got the characters down perfectly I think. Man it's been so long, had to google everyone to remember what they looked like. I wish more people wrote this fandom. Great job. Really enjoyed it!

Who did you have play Elizabeth? Just curious.

This is great! One small piece of constructive critisism. It's established from the start that the Tomorrow People are physically unable to kill another living being. Adam even indicates as such by showing Lisa the bite from the shark he couldn't bring himself to stab with his knife. So there's no way either Adam or Megabyte could have killed those spiders in Elizabeths purse.

Otherwise, great work. Keep it up