I believe I have read this before. Very interesting. I kinda like it. Not really a quibble but more of matter of my personal opinion/tastes; I think its best to either do T/U or OVA not copying the two 2gether. But small beans either way. ;-)

I get the feeling that this is one of your earlier works. Its not quite up to par with your other stories in terms of grammar and spelling but the story was excellent either way. The concept that Dr. Clay created the universe where the EVA series took place was unique and that Tsunami was the mother of Lilith was interesting. You took a few liberties with the Tenchiverse since Nagi is from the first TV series and the Goddesses are only from the OAV series, but that is nothing to really quibble about since I do the same thing by mising the canons of the Tenchi series. Nagi being Ryoko's sister is a plot device that is often used but its one that really works well. I really liked it.

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