This was a good chapter please make more!

i love it. i am a huge kessi fan and anything kessi related is ok in my book! i would love it you update soon please please i want to know what happens!

Great fic. You should definately add more to this. Good job!

Although I love your writing. I have a hard time believing that Kyle could be cold, or that Jessie would stick up for Amanda in any way. But I love the detail. :) Keep up the good work.

This is a fantastic complete it

This is a fantastic complete it

I have enjoyed your story so far. I am curious to see where your plot goes and your writing is well done. There are a couple small errors, such as at the end "while stayed Jessi with Kyle and held him as he slept." where it looks like a couple words simply got mixed up. No biggie.

Looking forward to the next part. :)

I like this story, keep writing :)