this is a great story!

question: I noticed on your profile you have both stories listed twice. Is there a difference between them or was it just an accident. Also I hav read parts of this stroy as well. So I will try to finish it nsometime, 2mrw maybe. Ive got to leave 4 work b4 long today; Im using librarys internet.

Shinji's whipped.

Washu-chan, don't scare the living shit out of Shinji and his angels. Of course, she does anyway, ah, well, so much for that idea.

It was a good story. It could become a great story if you would add more detail and description. It would also help if you didn't just tell what they did or said but actually write it out as it goes. But overall good job.

Very good, I haven't seen Tenchi before, but I have seen Evangelion and let me tell you, I have not yet seen such a good crossover before! And the idea of Shinji marrying both Asuka and Rei, that was origional! I 've toyed with the idea myself but decided that Asuka would kick his ass if he pulled a double so I had Rei paired with someone else in my fic. All in all great story.

Wow, the way you bonded the battle of the Evangelions with the battle of the Choushins, BRILLIANT. I always had my hopes to make a good EVA Tenchi fic, but as you have seen, my fics are for the most part, disasterpieces. Although EVA Muyo was the epitome of crap fiction, Ultimate Love wasn't too far behind. *sniff* I'm glad to see at least one person was able to pull it off though...

Nice Fiction. I liked it. About your reveiw on my evangelion thing thanks for trying to help me fix it rather then yell and insult it like some have done since I'm only a novice writer. Well Goodbye!

okay dennis. you have my atrtention now. please finish this story. i want to see what happenns next, besides some grammer problems i think this is an excel;lent story. especially the way you slowly integrated the masaki family into the story instead of rushing it like most peole try to. i like that alot. well send me an e-mail as soon as the next chapter is up.

Sincerely,

RT

good job )

I follow this fic since light of happiness , and I think this rewrite are much more in character for the children ) .

Please more ))))

good job )

I follow this fic since light of happiness , and I think this rewrite are much more in character for the children ) .

Please more ))))