That's really sad.

“My dear Marguerite,” he announced theatrically, bowing towards the vision of the dead nightclub. “That all depends on what’s in your mind.”

Ooooh, I REALLY liked that line! Keep writin'! This was great.

Twix

this is again a fantastic piece, especially this paragraph: 'Crimson and white- blood and innocence. That was what she¡d been in that Hindi wedding gown, her brittle hair interwoven with diamonds. One part of her a virgin, the other part a whore. That was why he hated that memory. She hadn¡t been Satine then, the person who was so full of life and love that she¡d taken joy in her footprints in the sand.'

that touched me deeply, contrasting her outer purity with her murky past and actions...and the love that lay beneath it all! this is going in my favourites too!

That was absolutely gorgeous. Really poetic and bittersweet and beautiful and just enough of a hint of darkness...oh it was wonderful! :)

The song was perfect, too.

Ooh, you added to it! Yay! *dances happily* LOVERLY!

:) ::sniff:: Beautifully written...probably the best thing I have ever read, and I applaud you on that because I'm a picky reader. BTW, are you ever going to update The Aspects of Love?

Can't wait to see more of your work!

-Amanda

Brilliant.

The emotions are perfect and I could get lost in your descriptions, one of the best fanfictions I've ever read.

Simply beautiful story Camille :) The descriptions were all lovely, and the twist was definitely unexpected.

Spectacular job, dahling :D

*Nita

WINDMILLS! WINDMILLS ARE IN MY MIND! *laughs maniacally*

Riiiiiight... you know I love it, chiquita!

Wow, Camie. That was so beautiful and bittersweet. And I love the descriptions-there was one sentence that gave me the chills [in a good way]. Keep it up!

Wow... this was absolutely amazing, Cami. You write so beautifully... I should just quit right now and give up. I loved this. Your descriptions are perfect and everything is just loverly. You rock.

Ooh! I am ze first reviewer!

You rock the infamous well-loved rather-smelly-now kitten socks :) And the new rougey kitten umbrella I got today! Muy fun :)

Camie, what would I ever do without you? Be boring and not see the fun in fat men and frying pans, of course!

*hugs* Luff ya chica!