|Reviews for The New Professor|
| reader 10/20/11 . chapter 3
Wow! Compared to other authors, you update really fast! But, the chapters are really, really small (seriously). It can be distracting (and to some readers- anoying) for the reader to have to press the "next chapter" button every (like) 8 lines... Also, a recommendation- you habe some really good diologe and character actions, but not much setting. For example- in this latest chapter the reader has no idea where this conversation is taking place until "professer" Kirland says for them to take their seats, and even then its not very desciptive. Another thing you could add is a sense of time. For instance- when you left off on ch 2 Harry and co. were in some hallway or the Great Hall (I'm not exactly sure...) and then in this chapter they're suddenly elsewhere? It doesn't add up very well... try adding a time-skip notice or attempt to add a section where the characters are walking/changing location. It helps with the fluency of the story.
| Sharrkolla 10/20/11 . chapter 3
Great story, but I wish your updates were longer, but otherwise I really like it, update soon!
| Anonymous 10/20/11 . chapter 3
A little short for my tastes, but the content was most excellent.
Please continue, stories like these are either not in supply or badly written, yours is neither.
Good luck with the next chapters.
| georgster101 10/20/11 . chapter 3
| IGGY demon sis 10/20/11 . chapter 3
| SilverLunaMoon 10/20/11 . chapter 3
Haha XD liked this one :)
| kerricarri 10/19/11 . chapter 3
They're definitely not second years or they'd be mooning over prissy prancy defense prof boy instead. But why does Arthur keep popping up randomly? It's like he's eavesdropping just to give himself the right opportune moment to insert himself into the convo to make pithy remarks. It's a little creepy actually, with this mysterious older guy hanging unseen in the background...ready to jump into the convo with his wiggling big eyebrows...
| meme12345bunny 10/19/11 . chapter 3
please continue :)
but can you please make the chapters longer :3
| Atemu'sLotus 10/19/11 . chapter 3
I can see all of the countries laughing their asses off at Arthur and his robes. Poor Arthur.
Lavender has the right idea. ;p
Please keep writing!
| EvangelineNoel 10/19/11 . chapter 3
It's quite all right if you haven't decided on the year yet!
I can imagine 'Professor Kirkland' would be incredibly nonchalant about talking about whether he is pure blood or muggle born, but I do believe he'd never answer outright as to what he is, so I'm very happy with how in-character he is so far!
| Draconis Darkess 10/19/11 . chapter 3
Mr. Kirkland it is not proper nor is it wise to stalk people, let alone teleport behind them and use your insane connection with the people of your country to read their minds and to know what they say about you behind your back... all though if you shave those-
| JackFrost14 10/19/11 . chapter 2
nice fic, :)
| RAWR 10/19/11 . chapter 2
Reviewing right now... So you better update! XD
It's great so far! Can't wait for the next chapter! I wanna see how everyone else reacts when seeing that a "muggle" (aka IGGY lolz) is gonna teach them... :)
| Uryuu-Nipaa 10/19/11 . chapter 2
I reviewed so update again soon :P.
| horasdbsk 10/19/11 . chapter 2
waiting for the next chap :)