hm sounds cool :D

but please tell me you wont write the entire story in first person...i cant stand it when people do that :P

lol any way looking forward to your next update

Hello, Matt. I'm glad this new story of yours definetly a different apporoach to telling stories. However as much as I like your bounty hunter, she sounds just too like you, Matt.A bounty hunter or an assissain wouldn't try to make it so obvious, as anomonity is their life. So with that taken care of, it's an convicing start and you really need to change your profile intro, you don't live in Amherst anymore. You live in Brooklyn.