|Reviews for Falx|
| Helpin' Hand 6/5/12 . chapter 2
The dialogue is stiff or cliched. An example: "I will eat your soul, little girl," he panted, lips stretching into an open-mouthed grin and revealing rows of perfect, tiny fangs. "I wonder how it will taste? Soft and tender, like you?"
You also have unclear awkwardly worded sentences that take away from the writing. Example: Five minutes and two-thirds of the long stairway later, she was regretting the brisk pace she had set on the way out.
Thought this could help you improve! I guess I just found your dialogue to be tacky and it took away from the story- for me at least. I hope this was helpful!
| justmyluck247 5/19/12 . chapter 1
| soul eater crazy 2/19/12 . chapter 2
loving the story cant wait for the next chap
| bluedevil77 1/6/12 . chapter 2
I love it. Thats all I can say. Please please please! Write more! :D
| Don't Smile 12/18/11 . chapter 2
if u can read that u must be pro :D
| RisingSm0ke 12/15/11 . chapter 2
Hehehe, I like Soul's reaction to having to eat the soul. It made me smile, also great job so far. I hope you update soon so I can read more!
| GrossGirl18 12/15/11 . chapter 2
This is really hood. I'm not sure where you're going with it, but I like it.
| bma925 12/15/11 . chapter 2
This is a good story, I like it so far
| princessangel123 10/22/11 . chapter 1
How could you *sniffle* do this *sniffle* t-t-to meeeeee!
| bluenian98 10/17/11 . chapter 1
oh come on serrieously a cliffhanger!
| Progota 10/17/11 . chapter 1