I really liked the story but was not a huge fan of Mel or Noah. They were just to underdeveloped I mean both of them barely had any lines and spent most of the story kissing and cuddling. Also I was kind of confused on the Daniel character it just seems like he popped out of nowhere.

Oh. My. GOD! Best Twister story I've ever read. This is awesome. I hope you update it soon!

please update soon

Hmmmm there are other fanfiction sites out there, that do allow MA fics besides and :/ A petition I think is useless, the admins won't do anything for a petition.

Sorry if I sound mean but really...just post your MA material on a site that allows it ; It sucks though I know, because why have an M rating if you can't have extreme violence or lemons?

Loved the new chapter. So happy you updated, can't wait to see where the story goes

please continue this story! I really do like it and hope that you get all the way to the ending. I can't wait to see what Faye and Mel do to help their parents along to the happily ever after :D

This has a pretty good start. Update soon please.

I am loving the whole premise to this story and I can't wait to see where you take it.