Wow good job i love it so far. Plz update i want to hear bout the part Jesse's POV where he interrupted Tad and Susannah kissing!

Excellent!

Hoping you update soon, and that you are well, Andromeda

I love this!

Great so far, please update soon!

:)

Another chapter, another review. This is how the system works. Anyway loved the little talks in this chapter. I was laughing a little at suze's dad. Update soon

Ahh if only Suze could have figured that out oh well the story would have been sorta lame then... I hope your uploaded thing gets figured out soon. Update soon(as always)

I like this, it's staying true to Jesse's character and I would like to read more. Why did you pick the 2nd book out of all of them?

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Fox

Its pretty good so far! Id like to read more..

It seems like a good start(: awesome. Update soon? (:

For those who got confused cause it was updated but there's only one chapter, I had another chapter but it was a later one and I deleted it and put this one up. but I'm planning on putting the other one up when I get to it. Also I'm still pretty new to this whole putting story up things so I don't know how to do it. I mean I know enough to be able to post stuff but changing the chapter order, not so much.

There's only on chapter but its an update? I'm so confused but I'll go with it. Really good chapter update soon:)

really good for a first story with each update im really excited to see how you interpret the story into Jesse's pov... update soon :)

Hmmm...I would love some more. :) I thought that this was a good place in the series to start with.