Hmm either Jenner hit her or...maybe it was her "ol' pal" Merle!? I doubt that though...update soon please!

i feel really bad for both of them , i just hope that they can go thru all this trouble together.

I read your entire story in two days lol. I just really love The Walking Dead! I can't wait for your next chapter. I'm really looking forward to the chapter when the barn gets overrun. Update soon!

shaun and no troble...is that even possable

Lol I love the shish kabob friend! Great chapter

plz add more chapters soon plz

i really like the "only person driving" reference lol - next chapter please :D

you need to put cute sophia and carl moment like in the comic XD

Lol loved the line "only person driving and you still get in a accident" lol awesome

Please, please don't kill shane!

Love it! Hope Shane and Blair work their issues out

Interesting chapter. Felt a bit rushed and I wish it had been longer. Still... can't wait till the next update. I love your story!

update soon:) keep shane and blair together :)

update please, dont kill shane let them get back together i also hope lori baby is ricks. nice writting :)

"A Mary Sue is generally accepted as a character whose positive aspects overwhelm their other traits until they become one-dimensional"- Part of Wiki's description of a Mary Sue. I'm not that same guest, but I would agree with that. I think this is the part of a Mary Sue they were talking about; she's quite one-dimensional and lacks depth to her. Right now, I'm reading her as an immature brat who, when she doesn't get her way, gets pissed at people. I would guess she's in her late twenties and well, come on. To me, you're not elaborating on some things enough and I'm really big on that. Trust me, I'm good with this stuff, I've been told many times before to add "meat", and when I did, it makes things so much clearer. It may help if you switched this story to third person - talk about Blair as the author, not as Blair herself.