Well, this was kinda fluffy, so I don't see what you're worrying about because plenty of people like this kind of fluff! *hugs cloud* I think you could have made this into multiple chapters, though, because it's like over 7,000 words. But this is still going in my favs!

Could have sworn I'd R&Red this before. Anyway, this was great!

Now go finish In Due Time. xD

Very well written and very well done!

I loved the plot :)

Slow build, subtle moments-good work there. A little rough around the edges with some of your sentence structures and details, I think, but nothing that a little time and practice won't refine.

Very very good. Again, i love that you never have them suddenly realizing i'm in love with you. Instead, its more gradually, something that's quiet diffucult to do in a one-shot. I applaud you. Keep it up, i hope you continue In Due Time, it's one of the best Naruto stories i've ever read.

Perfect. I haven't read such an inspiring NS fic in such a long time, it really gives hope. The setting, characterisation, emotions, they were all spot on.

And you're wrong, this really is a breath of fresh air.

I dug it so much I fell in love ;( Get my terrible joke? ;D Great job haha :) Faved and everything, keep up the great work as all the warm and fuzzies came across perfectly, the only thing i'd suggest is work on the flow between transitional time periods as it seemed they were fairly random and sometimes confusing at how abrupt they were... but I'm not sure if you meant them to be like that because they kind of worked very well with the theme of autumn and the general theme of the story... so yeah... haha :D

Cute, I think you caught the feel of autumn very well. It seemed a little choppy to me and there were a few typos but meh we all have them in our stories. My only problem is that you had Naruto still play pranks D: I would have thought he would have grown out of that. I know you went and explained more into dept about that but I think the story would have been a little better without that part. Much luck to you in the contest :D

Aww really nice stuff here :D goooooood

beautiful story, thank you! :)

HA, super cute! Sweet, complex and humorous. Loved it, keep up the great work; I'm always excited to read your naruto ff!

God damn you for writing such a good story that I had to search for a wifi spot so I could sign in and write a review...

This was pretty perfect—the NaruSaku library needs to host more contests cause its usually when the best stories pop up.

Peace and thanks for sharing this great oneshot with us,

Born From a NaruSaku Lemon

A very good one-shot! D

Congrats, and thanks for the nice read!

wah i loved this :D

awesome story!

This was really cute! I like how you incorporated the theme (autumn) into your fic. Awesome job :D