*pout* why didn't you finishthis great story!

omfg lol! Do you know how HILARIOUS it is to hear the Godess of Love and Romance proclaim that she

"can't stand all this mushy stuff."

LOL! Proof that if I diwof a fluff overdose I have full rights tp sue you in the afterlife ;p

With your using Nihonese, is it because he's mixing japanese and english? Because the Japanese term for, well, Japanese is Nihonjin. There was also a part where they were in a taxi a few chapters back where Duo said "Kono wa?" but he should have used "Ano wa?" because Kono is "this (that is close to me)" So "kono hito"would be "This person near me" while "ano hito" would be "That person over there" and "sono hito" would be "that person near you."

Taku

It has been a long time since I read this story. I really need to reread this. I was hoping to see it updating. But glad I found this story again.

... well here comes trouble. XD Shini's gonna kick his ass. Ah, Heero, the plan was so good... and then you hormoned. Naughty Heero! XD Is ya gonna add to it soon? Please? It's a really good story, more emotional than what I usually read... but that just proves how good it is!

Sorry I was sneak-reading before, it's a really incredible story I LOVE it... XD But something in this chapter really made me laugh... when Shini was wearing Heero's clothes and Heero said 'mortal clothing doesn't have wing holes', I realised I was actually wearing a shirt with a large hole in the back... wing holes! X3 Sorry Heero, you just need to wear women's clothing.

i love your story, and i would also love to see it completed, will you ever finish this story or have you abandoned it?

Hey, your story is fab!

although, did you know that japan doesn't actually have an army?

they're not allowed one, because of WW2

NANI, WRITE MORE! AND KICK CUPID'S A*S!...I was thinking though, Cupid's arrows should not have as much of an effect on Heero as they would other, more normal mortals, right? Oh, and Heero so needs to read that book! And while thinking on it, wouldn't Heero have been ejected from his house if the blessing had been completed.

Hmm, seems to me that Heero's previous incarnations must have killed themselves because Duo/Shini had yet to be born/created. It must have been heartrending for him to suffer loneliness. I wonder if he can actually die by normal means...

Hmm, Heero should consider leaving Shini with Takamura for the rest of the day as 'divine punishment' for being a egotistical jerk. :)

are you dead? is that why you don't update anymore?

OH MY GOD!

i read this story on fanlib and i wanted to be your friend and i commented itbut sadly, its gone now T_T

but heres whet i said:

YOU ARE A STORY GOD... GODDESS... PERSON!

no one can write wih this much depth and understanding its almos as if, you...lived it

please continue writing like this you would be a sinner not to XD

Just mentioning... Ichor is gold not blue. That's been bugging me for a while.

WoW... it's been a LONG time since i've last enjoyed a fic as much as this one... i really hope you're planning on continuing this... it's very engaging and entertaining.