Beautiful. Just beautiful.

The shortness of the scenes, and how everything comes in little glimpses spread out across time, really works here. And I love what you've done with Elizabeth's character.

This is twenty kinds of stunning. This story left me no doubts on the fact that this Elizabeth is the true one, and this is exactly how the story was always meant to end. You made it all fit so perfectly together there's really no other choice. Also, the flashes in insight into Will, Jack, and the drowned women, were beautifully done.

Oh I like this! I agree, a much stronger ending than soppily waiting on a beach for a rather lacklustre man!

I loved it. It's very true of the characters in their own ways.

Argh! I greatly enjoyed this tale!