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NerdyTheBookie 5/13/12 . chapter 5
*nose bleeds all over the floor*

OH MA GOSH. That was hot, taht was perfect, that was asdfghjk..

This soooooooo needs an update.
Lectictinium 4/29/12 . chapter 1
I adore everything about this chapter; the way it's written is perfect and I think Feliciano's seduction plan was pefect ;D

Also, this line: "and watching the videos of dramatic hamsters his brother emails to him."

That is one of the best lines I have ever read ever. EVER.

I have read Playtime, and I think this flows on from it nicely, and this is only chapter 1! I shall now proceed to read the rest and I look forward to it :D
Godsilladakilla 2/25/12 . chapter 1
Italy being a sadist...was I the only one who saw this coming? _ LOL.

But I really love your writing style. You must've had a lot of practice in it, it shows by how well its written.
shottersnation 2/24/12 . chapter 5
This is amazing! Please more?
shottersnation 2/24/12 . chapter 5
This is amazing! Please more?
nonnie 2/24/12 . chapter 5
This is the classiest porn I've ever read.
Free Beloved Army 2/20/12 . chapter 5
Wow, this was... Wow owo
Dark wolf's last day 2/9/12 . chapter 4
Oh, hot DAYUM.

Ooooooohhh, daaaaaammmnnn.

OKAY. OKAY. I really liked this. Being the grammar freak that I am, I noticed a few mistakes, but not enough to take away from the story in any way.

I actually felt like I was being a creeper outside the window at some points. Then I was sad because I wasn't, but still! I loved this sooo much!
Fallen-Kitsune-Chan 1/14/12 . chapter 4
The sequel, as I thought, is just as mind blowing! I wish I was there watching instead of here reading! So sexy! Fallen-chan out! ..
yaoi lover14706 1/13/12 . chapter 4
Damn -try's to wipe of drool but continues to drool more- sorry for the language but seriously that is the only thing that is going though my head. I seriously can't get enough of this. It's do hot and lov
Brisling 1/2/12 . chapter 4
wow.. just wow! Please make more! :D
Ikitu 1/1/12 . chapter 4
My god, this fanfiction is so gorgeous. I just love it.

Again it's a really really awesome chapter with perfect characterisations of both, great descriptions of what they do and with so many emotions! *_*
Ninja-Penguin-Luv 12/31/11 . chapter 4
*has MASSIVE nosebleed* \\\\\\\\ I don't know what to say... maybe next chapter I will :D Love it
Free Beloved Army 12/30/11 . chapter 4
This was absolutely amazing, as always. I look forward to more.
Aurelene 12/30/11 . chapter 4
The thing I love most about your two fics (Playtime and then Replay) besides the AMAZINGLY AWESOME SMUT is your characters. The first time I read Italy dominating at all was your last fic, and the first time I read Italy topping was this fic right here. And best of all, it's done realistically and true to character. In addition to the BDSM (which I didn't realize I liked so much before these fics), these fics first off stress the actual love and adoration between them, and the trust necessary to be able to introduce pain without crossing the line, and the fact that they are realistically equal in this relationship (there isn't one designated UKE and one designated SEME, which bothers me about a lot of Yaoi).

Usually, Germany is portrayed as this super amazing sex god giving it to the doe eyed virgin Italy, but as far as realistic characterization goes, Germany is awkward as hell in canon. Canon Germany would want to be dominated, and want to lose control. Meanwhile, canon Italy, though he is a goofy coward, has other aspects to his personality. He's still a multi-dimensional character, and nobody is one way all the time. I think that was captured very well in your two fics. Absolutely lovely work.

Even though it's more or less a PWP, you still manage to insert believable characters that aren't just empty husks of flesh people are supposed to be fapping over.
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