That was awesome! I LOVED the last sentence, that was great!

Wow that was a really awesome story! Thanks for this :)

THe last few lines are beautiful. I miss Jenny so much. Why Bellisario, why!

Loved it! Oh, a perfect ending to this, and very sweet as well. :)

Loved it! Absolutely brilliant chapter, full of tension. :)

Loved it! Oh so hot... :P

Bravo! I totally loved the entire story! You wrote this perfectly and I would love if you did another one like this. Amazing and I can't wait to see what else you do with Jibbs! The emotion, the feeling, the interactions, and the plot was just magnificent. I must say you really put your heart into this story and it definitely showed.

Congrats!

Absolutely amazing! I honestly think that in this story you described Jenny and Jethro exactly as I would want them to be. Your work is truly fascinating... :D

p.s. ''And fools kissed happily on the street, lost to the world around them.

Returning to the beginning.''

best two lines you 've ever written! seriously...

YAY! *clap - clap - clap - clap*

What a beautiful ending! I loved it!

Soooo what are you going to do next?

Yay! Thank you for another way that the show /should/ have gone!

Awww a beautiful ending to a beautiful story, really amazing i'm going to miss it greatly. Write something more soon

Love, love, love it! Yeah for fresh starts!

I look forward to your next offering and hope it's up soon.

Bravo! I loved this story, well any story with Jenny as the lead character is what I like but you write wonderfully! Hmmmm, the person she owes, Ziva? or Will?

Whaaaaaa! This story is over! *cries pathetically* I must say, I LOVE the resolution. I'm glad that Jenny is also fixing mistakes in her professional life, and that she wanted to be director because of ambition as well as revenge, I've always liked it that way. Gotta love the use of that "wouldn't have taken no for an answer" line. And the Russian play... lol! Great ending to a great story. Looking forward to that awesome new story, my interest is piqued!

Sorry I haven't been reviewing but I have definately been reading and enjoying. I just LOVE how you spin a tale. So heartbreaking...This story has been oh so good and while I know this tale is far too quickly coming to an end, I for one would love to read more about Jem and John.