| Reviews for Conan, The Feathered Serpent |
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Guest 12/17/12 . chapter 9 14th paragraph from the bottom: "Now you must past the second." "past" should be "pass" |
Guest 12/17/12 . chapter 8 first paragraph: "had not arrive in time" past tense - "arrived" ninth paragraph from the bottom: "which we soon besieged on all sides " "we" should be "were" |
Guest 12/17/12 . chapter 7 about paragraph 30 from the bottom: "At length, on hot," should be: one hot |
m 12/17/12 . chapter 6 paragraph 32, I think: "but he no other tools" should be: "he had no" about the 18th paragraph from the end: "now withdrawing him," "him" should be them last sentence: "–then setting to their work." put a space between dash and then, i.e., - then |
m 12/17/12 . chapter 5 typo last paragraph: "accompanied by solely by a crew of somber" should be: accompanied solely by a crew of somber |
m 12/17/12 . chapter 5 type, fourth from last paragraph "it had better avoid meat all costs." |
pacificuser 10/27/11 . chapter 1cool! best story of free content for conan! deserves to be continued! Keep Howard's alive! |