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Caffeine High 4/16/09 . chapter 1
Why in these movies do the heroines never fall for the guy I think is cool?

Neo can go die
Alexxis T. Swan 1/13/09 . chapter 1
Umm I read this whole series in a weird order.

1. Fire and Ice

2. Darkness and Twilight

for love

4. Another life time

5. The grey and the black

Well I switched 3 and four since I found out there was an order and I would have got the last one right anyway. Next time there is an order I will make sure I get it right. This happened b4. Also to a good series. so... I loved all of them!
Digital Buddha 3/5/04 . chapter 1
My God. I love it!
princess leia 6/27/03 . chapter 1
ok

sorry i get it now. i did this after re reading this one. i get it!

its good.
T'Lorie 6/4/03 . chapter 1
Oh so sweet, Agent Smith for Trinity. She broke his heart. Any chance of them getting back together. No , oh well can you imagine neos reaction. "Sorry neo, I used to date your worst enemey." *ha ha ha falls off chair*

anyway cool fic, keep writing, but by the looks of it nothing can stop you.

see ya
Arabwel 4/3/03 . chapter 1
This is great, too... Although I would prefer a more detailed l0ook on how Smuith acquired emotuions, that would wotrk as a prequel kind of thingy... I like this. I like this. I LIKE THIS: This is good... so very, very good. What can I say? I am a Smith-whore. :D
Lord Angelus 5/12/02 . chapter 1
so sad. Agent Smith is hurt. wwaaaaaaaaa...can have sweet and pretty ending for Trinity and Sweet Smith?
matrixstyle89 5/6/02 . chapter 1
this is soo good! I wish you could make another one, but it's the end. I want to see what happens between Smith and Neo. And it would also be very interesting to hear Smith say "love"..
Meadow 4/29/02 . chapter 1
Interesting, very interesting. I almost felt sorry for Smith there. (I emphasize the almost, lol)
Mara Trinity Scully 4/29/02 . chapter 1
I definitely like how you used the 1996 script at the end there.
Narsus 4/29/02 . chapter 1
"Hearts do not break. They are not hard enough."

Very funny but also very sad as well.

Poor Smith, not only does Trinity leave him but it almost looks like her relationship with Neo is being flaunted in his face.

I like the fact that Brown seems to be trying to provide some comfort but doesn't really seem to know how to.

Will there be more in this series?
angelmad 4/29/02 . chapter 1
Poor, poor little Smith. He actually luved her, not just manipulated her for his own good, please make him come back and make him happy, ack, I feel sorry for a sentient program.
Tanathir 4/28/02 . chapter 1
Another interesting installment. I didn't expect so much angst from Smith, but it seems to fit. I like the lines about a broken heart...it may not be hard enough to literally break, but that's certainly what it feels like.

Please write more. You've come up with an interesting twist and I'd like to see where else you take the storyline.
Kirsty-Q 4/28/02 . chapter 1
*sniffle* Poor guy! MORE! Maybe something a little happier? Perhaps? Give the poor program a little happiness? *nudges* Ya know you want to!
PL 4/28/02 . chapter 1
*Sob* Poor, poor poor sentient program. Sighhhh ... When will Trin realize that Neo is not the brightest bulb on the Christmas tree? I won't pester you about it after this, but I'd sure like to see a third installment in which Trin & Smith meet up with ... interesting consequences. Ahem. Right. Incidentally, did you take that bit of dialogue at the end from one of the screenplay drafts? Just curious ...
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