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   leafysummers 10/27/11 . chapter 10Are you serious! You can't just leave off there! Nooooooo! Update update update! What's his answer! Must. Know. NOW! lol! And I like the bits of humor too! :) "This is so cute, I might throw up!" I laughed so hard there. His sarcasm really fits in well! Update ASAP! |
| leafysummers 10/27/11 . chapter 9 Oh God! OMG OMG OMG! She was awake that whole time! That's so sweet of him though! She's having these bad dreams, and it's obvious he wants to look out for her. Adorable! Update soon! |
| BlamionexTandrexChax4evr 10/27/11 . chapter 9 Update! |
| DominoTyler 10/27/11 . chapter 9 Oh my gosh, oh my gosh! I can't wait for the next chapter! |
| CrescentMoon12 10/27/11 . chapter 8 That was too bloody adorable :) Update soon! Ishani |
| DominoTyler 10/26/11 . chapter 8 I don't know about anyone else, but that's what I'm calling it! Haha! This chapter was beautiful. It made me feel very happy. I love how his happy moment was Hermione touching his hand. It's so sweet. Thank you for inventing this story, you little genius! Until next time- DominoTyler |
| leafysummers 10/26/11 . chapter 8 I'm glad you didn't rush into the fluff. Make them show it with moderation. That's the key really. Too much and it looks fake; too little and it gets frustrating. Good job so far! This is going into my faves! |
| leafysummers 10/26/11 . chapter 7 Don't rush in too fast, but yeah. Show some subtle fluff. Updates! |
| DominoTyler 10/26/11 . chapter 7 I really liked this chapter! I like the story's pace, too. Can't wait for the lovey-dovey! |
| DominoTyler 10/25/11 . chapter 6 Oh, I hope things turn out the way they want them to. Now that I'm all caught up, I can leave a PROPER review. This story is wonderful. It's very creative, and I've never read anything with a plot like this one, at least not on fanfiction! My only complaint is your tense mix-ups, and they're so rare that they're barely noticeable! I really like that Draco and Hermione are both completely in character. And I also like that the story is moving at a smooth pace, and you're not just immediately jumping to everything that could possibly happen. I mean, in the range of chapters a lot has happened, but you manage to write it so that it doesn't seem so fast. Keep up the good work, and I can hardly wait for the next chapter! :) |
| DominoTyler 10/25/11 . chapter 5 *Gasp* Hermione? Oh, no! They're becoming friends. One small critique-you sometimes mix up your tenses. Other than that, the story's brilliant! Next chapter! |
| DominoTyler 10/25/11 . chapter 4 StarKid! Whoo! Haha! And I can't wait to hear about Draco's death eater stuff! This is really creative. More! Next chapter! |
| DominoTyler 10/25/11 . chapter 3 Interesting...so they're trapped here? I like this story already! |
| CassandraKitti 10/25/11 . chapter 6 I absolutely love this story! The situation actually makes sense to how they warm up to each other. It's not like - all of a sudden Draco just decides he likes her out of nowhere. The portkey idea was great. Don't really have any criticism right now, just keep going as you are! I can't wait for the next chapter. - |
| DominoTyler 10/25/11 . chapter 2 Wow, so creative...what happens next? I guess I'll find out! I'm so excited to read the next chapter, I'll do it now! |
