Look at this! Happy and brief? I'm thoroughly impressed. No, really, I am. Tony's excited nervousness was a joy to read.

Awesome with a side of amazing .

Ahhhh! *Screams*

Sorry...I'm about as unrestricted in my excitement as Tony is with his panic at the mention of "velvet-lined box" - underline that three times if you will.

This is what I'm thinking, isn't it? Isn't it? Velvet-lined box! *Screams again*

He's slightly insane to be out on such a day though. Is he not hoping to be able to go through the day of 'minor significance' in one piece?

I want to laugh at his nervousness, haha XD poor man! I love the way you've threaded it into everything he did/does, from brushing his teeth three and a half times to panicking over the lack of cars and red lights.

I'm wondering...would you mind very much if I borrowed your idea and uh...put him in front of Ziva? :D

Beautifully written, as always!

Soph

Very nice fic. Short but sweet.

You could probably make a ten word story sound poetic and memorable. I've said it before - it's quality not quantity that counts. Lovely look at Tony.

Aww! I love jumpy, nervous Tony. You captred him perfectly! Such a very sweet story. Beautiful work, as always. :-)

Loved it Zaedah. Short and sweet and beautiful.

Tony nervous to propose...how sweet...please continue :)

Short maybe, but sweet and I love the way you use words.

And once again, Zaedah has blown me away with an ever-present indescribable way with words and a subtly beautiful plot.

Ha... I love it! That was well-done, I really enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing!

That box better not be empty!

Lol

Love it

Hugs

Awww, this warms my heart, never mind the chilly surroundings! You've managed to capture perfectly what I'm sure most men feel when anticipating the popping of that all-important question. I'm so glad we females don't have to do it!

And so succinctly described, too. We'll get you writing drabbles yet...

I think this is a really good insight into how Tony might feel on this occasion.

REALLY!

Good one.