 Ranmaleopard 10/31/11 . chapter 1Interesting please continue! |
 keep writing this 10/19/11 . chapter 8 Wake Up! this has the possibility of being the greatest story ever. you dont even need ranma for it, it could be a stand alone masterpeice. |
 anon 4/3/11 . chapter 8 it's about time to update this one, ne? |
 AmNeg 3/14/11 . chapter 3 Oh YES!
Looks like I finally found a promising Ranma fanfic!
Thaaankyou thankyouthankyou. I hope you end up continuing this, I see great potential.
Hope your doing well. |
 Digital Dragon Productions 1/2/11 . chapter 8 It's a good read.
I say that the new priest has making a deal with the slavers \ bandits . They've been poisoning the fields and the bandits will continue attacking. The priests will make more request for gold \ treasure to build a shrine. If a person refuses then that person's goods is mysteriously attacked. Since the villages are far in between . This is a trick that the bandits and false priests has pulled off in different villages.
The priest was about to give a false show of his god's might to repel the bandits. As the 1 st wave is repelled and the main force is to attack and make the villagers quake in fear when he makes his grand entrance. . only to find that the main wave is no where in sight and Ranma and the chief's daughter calls out victoriously and for help is securing the defeated bandits. |
 Digital Dragon PRoductions 12/20/10 . chapter 8 Nicely Done. |
 Hiryo 12/13/10 . chapter 8Thank you for updating this wonderful fanfic!
Please update soon! |
 Hiryo 12/13/10 . chapter 7Wow finally an update to this wonderful fanfic.
Please keep 'em coming! |
 holy 12/10/10 . chapter 8 miss me? i missed you, you shiney golden god you! update! often! please? |
 brindani 12/5/10 . chapter 8Chapters are a little short, but I'm definitely liking this story. You've made a land with mystery with just enough description to be nice and vivid.
The only concern here is if this camp is too close to the village and the twister goes out of control, this could be very destructive. |
 Screaming Dean 12/3/10 . chapter 8This was nice and wonderful to read. But the chapter's were awfully short. |
 luger 7 12/1/10 . chapter 1Looks like a most excellent chapter. Party on, dude. |
 Naosj 11/30/10 . chapter 8I can hardly wait for more. Everything is interesting so far. |
 The Chosen One 11/27/10 . chapter 8 Awesome story man, but you need to update it faster damn it! |
 Dumbledork 11/25/10 . chapter 8Very happy to see a new chapter. |