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| Koga Kishi 2003-06-20 ch 1, | abusewow, it's pretty good ^^ well written |
| Reii Faye 2002-09-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseOoh, very nice. You should write what happens to her! Does she stay with the Dark Angel? Or does she hate him for what he did? I gotta' know! Pweeze? |
| cyberfrogX 2002-09-21 ch 1, | abuseInteresting, i think you should continue |
| Tevin Illithane 2002-07-17 ch 1, | abuseYeah, deios was right; it does feel really good. Some mortals get bitten just to feel the Embrace. It's like a really big rush of ecstacy, which is why not many get away from the Embrace of a Vampire |
| Jamie L. Word 2002-05-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseFascinating. Truly fascinating. He was a Ravnos, wasn't he? Your work is quite good. Sometimes I lose myself in the action sequences of my stories and falter in the descriptive aspects of my writing. |
| AZRAELof the Alabaster legi... 2002-05-11 ch 1, | abuseI like the characters, I like the premise but get your facts streight before writing the story. The Embrace dosn't hurt It feels REEEEEALY GOOD! By the way what clan are you from? Write me if you have time. Ja ne |
| Tigerclaw 2002-05-02 ch 1, | abuseHmm...this was interesting, if a little confusing. Good job |