And in the heart felt lies of a dying man,

The whispered promises of a gilded serpent,

And the traitorous cries of a truest love,

Perhaps then and only then can you see the dreaded truth.

be careful dont let the darkness take you...

wow. i am speachless. this is definitly going on my favorites list.

That was incrediably dark and insightfull look into Snape's mind.

an absolute epic!

interresting. nice to hear Snape and that he has problems too.

::stands there with mouth wide open:: Tries to talk... Wow.

...whoa. Excellent.

Ooooh...Harry, evil...I LIKE! Well written, by the way. And CREATIVE! Ten creativity points for YOU! I LIIIIKE!

Awwww... very sad. Good atmosphere of despair here. A good closure

WWWWOOONNNDDDDEEERRRFFFUULL!

-Bunz

I really liked how you humanized Snape! The "Quit w/ the Professor stuff..." comment was a welcome change from him. I also liked how you showed Harry's hurt and resentment about Snape's knowing his parents and Snapes understanding of it. I wonder if they almost were too familiar,though. Shouldn't there still be some resentment there? I haven't read the rest of the series, but if it is anything like this I will!

Pure pessimism. Lovely.

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you write really well, and personally i really like your series! keep 'em coming! the odd little hate/love friendship (?) type thingy between harry and "severus" is really interesting, and the small humorous touches planted keep the story light enough in a dangerous subject (i.e. voldemort)

KEEP WRITING!

:D These are so good. More please!