interesting. will it be continued?

I think this a really good story. Please write more.

Great! Any more chapters soon?

This was an awesome awesome awesome fanfic! I love it Please right more!

C'mon tell us what the 'professional reasons' where?

How are Dylan, Harper, Trance, Tyr, and Rommie going to rescue Beka and how are they going to react?

ooh, I've been waiting for a new part to this story. Can't wait for moe.

Wow! This is really interesting so far. Genetically engineered possibly? Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.

that was a great chapter.

please write more soon!

loving it

I seriously hate cliffhangers.

Whats gonna happen next?

Is Beka some new kind of genetically enhanced human? A new breed of Neitzchean?

How are they going to rescue Beka?

Does Tyr find out? If so how does he react?

hmmmm... interesting... So, Beka and Rafe were created as some sort of genetic experiment?

Thanks for updating. I had thought you'd given up on this one. Hope to see more soon.

Please write more. Please

Come on!

Tell us what happens next before go nuts!PLEASE

Whats next?

Is Beka who she has always thought she is?

Is Beka part Nietzschean? If so who is she ansister? Is it you knowwho,is that why he wants her? how will Tyr react when he finds out?