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Mistydeb 5/8/13 . chapter 34Oh dear I hope that Aro doesn't get much info from carlilse. Not that he could get the full working serum, but it could be enough that he learns about rose and Alice's involvement. Thks for the update, Debbie |
KimiD 4/22/13 . chapter 34Well, I am glad to see that her shield is in place and I just KNEW that she was going to be immune... HA! I just had a feeling that once she was cured james would not be able to use it against her, but that Ali and them also are immune, That was a good one! It just made sense if Hannah's blood was the cure and her anomily was cured so she could be turned she would Be immune... Great writing as always girlie! That is rough on Edward with his mind reading phasing in and out and I can understand Bella not sharing everything with Edward so aro could not touch and find out anything. I wonder when Bella figured out she was immune or if it was one of the scenarios that Ali had run across. Now is when things are gonna get dicey! |
twiclare 4/21/13 . chapter 33It's funny how the thought of Bella drinking from humans is harder to take than with Edward, although her strange ability to smell the bad characters is very different. She seemed very interested in Renata, I wonder if that was significant, does she have a shield, is she aware of it? |
twiclare 4/21/13 . chapter 32You managed to make the transformation erotic, well in the beginning at least. |
twiclare 4/21/13 . chapter 29You had me really worried for a while there! Must have been awful to be trapped inside his body unable to move or communicate. I'm guessing there is a lot more trouble ahead! I hope that she allows them to use the serum and that she can then be changed. I'm wondering if Victoria is going to make an appearance? Love this story, it keeps me guessing and I love your characters. |
twiclare 4/21/13 . chapter 27I'm guessing he has to survive...right? |
twiclare 4/21/13 . chapter 26James is obviously not stupid, I just hope Emmett is still ok. |
twiclare 4/21/13 . chapter 22There seems to be something 'other' about Hannah, be interesting to find out what it is. Billy allowing Edward onto the res is amazing. How far are things going to go with Jasper, I don't trust him. |
twiclare 4/20/13 . chapter 19Having a miscarriage is devastating, I know from experience but, in this instance I think that it was probably easier than actually having to agree to abort the baby. I don't think I've read a fic where Seth wasn't lovely, not sure I ever want to! At least they have Hannah coming back to her to look forward to, if that doesn't boost her spirits nothing will. |
twiclare 4/20/13 . chapter 17It's a shame that she did get pregnant, it will be so hard to make the decision but they really don't have a choice do they? I'm glad Sue visited, Bella needs all the love and support she can get. |
twiclare 4/20/13 . chapter 14I'm so glad, I love a nice Billy. Certainly didn't guess about Bella's parentage, I wonder, does this mean that James has some Quileute heritage or does the anomaly occur elsewhere. |
twiclare 4/20/13 . chapter 13Rose reacted to Bella just as I thought she would, I'm glad they will have another supporter. Demetri seems genuine...for now, lets hope it continues. You've provoked some interesting debate between my husband and myself regarding Edwards view that drinking animals blood is drinking from innocents; it's a different point of view, and on some levels it's difficult to argue against it! Probably helps that I'm an animal loving vegi! |
twiclare 4/20/13 . chapter 12Things are getting interesting, wolves, the Volturi, Demetri, James; there are so many different factions here. I hope that Alice's vision gives them the clues they need to find little Hannah, the idea of a mother being separated from her child is bound to get Rosalie right on side. Loving this, thanks. |
twiclare 4/20/13 . chapter 11Oh dear, this can't be good! |
twiclare 4/20/13 . chapter 9Lovely chapter, they were getting to know each other and enjoying just spending time together. I love the flower analogy from Bella. Very enjoyable bath time! |