This is a great beginning :) Keep it going!

Please continue!

Great story so far! I hope you update soon! Alan wake is such a great game but has yet to answer what happened to Alice, or if Alan escapes eventually. Hope to see more chapters from this story!

Well, this is an interesting plot idea, theorizing on what happened to Alice after the game. But you should run this through a grammar check for the sake of punctuation, and there were some sentences that seemed a bit out of place. Also, some paragraphs could be edited for more clarity. For instance,

"I gasped his name as I awoke from the nightmare. It was a moment before I realized that I was in our bed back home in Manhattan. The soft glow of the bedside lamp brought only a miniscule amount of comfort. My name is Alice Wake, and I suffer from Nyctophobia and since losing Alan to the bizarre events in Bright Falls it has only got worse. I was shaken from my thoughts by the buzzing sound of my cell phone vibrating against the nightstand. I checked to see whose call it was that interrupted my post-nightmare thoughts. It was Miriam Ryder head of publishing at Remedy Books."

Could be

"I gasped his name as I awoke from the nightmare. It took a moment before I realized that I was in our bed back home in Manhattan. The soft glow of the bedside lamp brought only a miniscule amount of comfort.

Since losing Alan to the bizarre events in Bright Falls my nyctophobia had only gotten worse. I was shaken from my thoughts by the buzzing sound of my cell phone vibrating against the nightstand. I checked to see whose call it was that interrupted my post-nightmare thoughts. It was Miriam Ryder, head of publishing at Remedy Books."

But I'm getting nitpicky here. Otherwise, I liked it. The nightmare scene with danger literally hovering over Alan's head was a good way to start the chapter, and it felt quite a lot like a cutscene that could have appeared in the game. Kudos for the fact that you brought some of Alice's profession into this as well - it fleshed out her personality a bit.

Anyways, hope to read more stories from you in this section in the future!

/Morgane