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FleurdeLysff 5/6/13 . chapter 17Such a beautiful story! |
Guest 5/1/13 . chapter 17 Great story plz write more! |
Sbf1966 4/19/13 . chapter 17I love this. Please update soon! I really want to see what Edward does next! |
Hanginginthere 3/16/13 . chapter 17 I love this story, so please keep going. Only one suggestion, don't keep using "barley" when you mean "barely." The first is a noun meaning a grain similar to "oats," the second is a modifier meaning "by a small margin." It's the most common typo I see in fanfiction stories, followed by "defiantly" used in the place of "definitely." I want to see this Edward acknowledge his feelings for Bella. I love how she challenges him one moment, then leans on his strength the next. I don't know how this beta thing works, but if you would like me to edit for you, I'd be happy to give it a go. |
runemagic 2/22/13 . chapter 17Omg, I love this story so much. I just reread it and it's still so good. I hope you didn't give up on this one. |
Debbie White 2/22/13 . chapter 17Great story! Love it so far keep going! cant wait for the next chapter! :) |
LEONGIRL 1/20/13 . chapter 17I was enjoying your story sooo much, its a pity that you have not up date yet! Thanks |
LEONGIRL 1/19/13 . chapter 1Will you up date soon? Thanks |
Guest 1/5/13 . chapter 17 oh my, i love that story! |
E.M.A998 12/25/12 . chapter 17Wow your story is really great, i was so excited that i couldnt stop reading after the first few chapters before going to bed and ended up staying till like 4 am untill i finished it cause i just could not stop. Please please PLEASE hurry with the update |
AHoboDarling 12/20/12 . chapter 17Yay! I missed new info on this group. Thanks for sharing and for making me want to hit Edward upside the head a teensy bit less, LOL. |
Edward's spouse 12/9/12 . chapter 17excellent. waiting for more. |
Guest 12/6/12 . chapter 17 Just started reading your story and love it. Historical fic is my fav genre, especially one that is as well written as yours. Looking forward to the next update. |
gadberry1 12/5/12 . chapter 17 so glad you're back. I'm still with you and still loving this story. charming characters, all of them. I took your advice and started over, glad I did, even if it did take up the last 4 hours! Looking forward to the next chapters. Thanks. |
Guest 12/5/12 . chapter 17 Amazing. Please update soon:) |