wow that was very wrong but so funny

hoo hooh hoo wheeze... Too funny. MORE,SLAVE!

Just kidding.

Heh, I like this. I disagree with the dud who reviewed bfore me. Even though this is a VERY odd fic, it comes into perfect focus when you learn enough about GGX. The only porblem is that this has too many inside jokes for the uninitiated.

Examples:

Axl-his weapon is called the kursai-gama, you never mentioned it has unlimited range

May-A thirteen year old girl that can weild an ancor?

Johnny-You never said that he was a super pimp until it was too late. (and he never has sex with the crew! Shame on you!)

Dizzy-...She has wings? And they talk?

Anji-Might wanna reveal him for ease of reading

Provide links so most people can see the charcters. A lot of this is visual. Good place is .

And my psycic senses tell me that Sol and Ky are gonna appear. Do me a favor and throw Chipp in for effect. And even though this is a GGX fic you should throw in Briget. More people should understand him. (yes HIM, that's right)

Overall, you shoulda put this in the Guilty Gear section, and write more!

This can only be the product of someone who is truely insane or on a really high drug trip. Its hard to say, really, but I would lean on insane.

You wanted that in small unmarked bills, right?

not that im complaining or anything, but im pretty sure im the guy who said write a new fic, and not ginrai

*Blames Ginrai*

Anyway...

Well, I like the choice of Guilty Gear X, but this chapter is too short to say much about. Knowing you, you have something up your sleeve, so I'll wait and see.