 Harrypotter-PercyJackson 10/23/11 . chapter 1I'm on a reviewing streak-great story! I am really starting to love your work. And you feel the same way I do about REid being all alone. I like how you used Baby Boy instead of Pretty Boy. Baby Boy sounds more brotherly, you know? But I can't resist Pretty boy. I ramble alot, I know. I love how Reid said, "Thanks, Derek" and not "Thanks Morgan." Derek sounds better in those moments. Some people cannot get away with using the first names of characters, but you pulled it off as expertly as Reid does physics magic. Great job! |